From 8d26e0fb7a475bb3533111dda281182265e80d0f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Francois Gouget <fgouget@free.fr>
Date: Sat, 29 Jan 2005 00:45:59 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Small wording tweaks

---
 help/generic.help            |  2 +-
 help/maintainer_ratings.help | 10 +++++-----
 help/privacy.help            |  2 +-
 help/voting.help             |  7 ++++---
 4 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/generic.help b/help/generic.help
index 234f067..574c49e 100644
--- a/help/generic.help
+++ b/help/generic.help
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ to verify the most important aspects of Wine environment configuration.</li><p>
 
 <li> In case of failure, try different builtin, native DLL settings:
 Run Wine with --debugmsg +loaddll to find out which
-DLLs are loaded as native or builtin ones.
+DLLs are loaded as native or builtin.
 Then make sure appropriate native versions are in the
 c:\windows\system directory as configured in your Wine
 config file. There are five options you can choose from when setting
diff --git a/help/maintainer_ratings.help b/help/maintainer_ratings.help
index 85601b8..0a96a31 100644
--- a/help/maintainer_ratings.help
+++ b/help/maintainer_ratings.help
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 <h3>Maintainers Ratings System Help</h3>
 
 <p>
-The Application Database features a Maintainers rating system that allows us and you to see
+The Application Database features a Maintainers rating system that allows you to see
 which applications work the best in Wine. This rating system is designed to assist
-users by giving a rating based on an "experts" experience.
+users by giving a rating based on an "expert's" experience.
 </p>
 
 <ul>
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ An application can be rated as Gold if it installs and runs "out of the box".
 <li>Silver</li>
 
 <p>
-If an application needs DLL overrides (native DLL's from a Windows instalation) to install and
-run but runs flawlessly otherwise can be rated as silver. There should be an accompanying "HowTo" 
-written to allow users to get this app to run.
+If an application needs DLL overrides (native DLL's from a Windows installation) to install and
+run but runs flawlessly otherwise, then it can be rated as silver. There should be an accompanying "HowTo" 
+written to allow users to get this application to run.
 </p>
 
 <li>Bronze</li>
diff --git a/help/privacy.help b/help/privacy.help
index b435c6f..9eba10b 100644
--- a/help/privacy.help
+++ b/help/privacy.help
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 <b>Cookies</b>
 <ul>
 	The Application Database uses cookies only to preserve login information in your web browser.
-	Advertisers or other companies do not have access to the AppDB's cookies. 
+	Advertisers and other companies do not have access to the AppDB's cookies. 
 </ul>
 </p>
 
diff --git a/help/voting.help b/help/voting.help
index 059277c..480a5b0 100644
--- a/help/voting.help
+++ b/help/voting.help
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ The Application Database features a voting system that allows you to pick which
 you would MOST like to see running in Wine.
 </p>
 
-<p><b>Step by Step on Voting</b></p>
+<p><b>Step by Step help on Voting</b></p>
 <ol>
 
 <li>Log into the Application Database.</li><p>
@@ -32,8 +32,9 @@ you would MOST like to see running in Wine.
    <li>When voting for an application, you are voting for <b>ALL</b> its various versions. There is
    a separate system in place for ranking versions.</li><p>
    
-   <li>You can clear your vote at anytime. Simply browse to any App in the database, select the app
-   in your vote list you want to clear, and click the Clear button.</li><p>
+   <li>You can clear your vote at anytime. Simply browse to any application
+   in the database, select the slot you want to clear, and click the Clear
+   button.</li><p>
 
 </ul>