From f7671e9d2accfc61f68b9b98cf5abf9c908e7fa5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Alexander=20Nicolaysen=20S=C3=B8rnes?= Date: Thu, 4 May 2006 00:22:32 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Language improvements. Also make the use of language more consistent. --- appsubmit.php | 43 +++++++++++++++++++++---------------------- 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) diff --git a/appsubmit.php b/appsubmit.php index 5ad1abe..486befb 100644 --- a/appsubmit.php +++ b/appsubmit.php @@ -22,39 +22,38 @@ function newSubmition($errors) { // show add to queue form echo '
'."\n"; - echo "

This page is for submitting new applications to be added to this\n"; - echo "database. The application will be reviewed by the AppDB Administrator\n"; - echo "and you will be notified via email if this application will be added to\n"; - echo "the database.

\n"; - echo "

Before continuing please check that you have:

\n"; + echo "

This page is for submitting new applications to be added to the\n"; + echo "database. The application will be reviewed by an AppDB Administrator,\n"; + echo "and you will be notified via e-mail if it is added to the database or rejected.

\n"; + echo "

Before continuing, please ensure that you have

\n"; echo "

"; - echo "

Please don't forget to mention which Wine version you used, how well it worked\n"; - echo "and if any workaround were needed. Having app descriptions just sponsoring the app\n"; - echo "(Yes, some vendors want to use the appdb for this) or saying \"I haven't tried this app with Wine\" "; - echo "won't help Wine development or Wine users.

\n"; + echo "

Please do not forget to mention which Wine version you used, how well it worked\n"; + echo "and if any workarounds were needed. Having app descriptions just sponsoring the app\n"; + echo "(yes, some vendors want to use the appdb for this) or saying ‘I haven’t tried this app with Wine’ "; + echo "will not help Wine development or Wine users.

\n"; echo "Please only submit applications/versions that you have tested.\n"; echo "Submissions without testing information or not using the provided template will be rejected.\n"; - echo "If you can't see the in-browser editors below please try Firefox, Mozilla or Opera browsers.\n"; - echo "

After your application has been added you'll be able to submit screenshots for it, post"; + echo "If you are unable to see the in-browser editors below, please try Firefox, Mozilla or Opera browsers.\n"; + echo "

After your application has been added, you will be able to submit screenshots for it, post"; echo " messages in its forums or become a maintainer to help others trying to run the application.

"; } //deny access if not logged on if(!$_SESSION['current']->isLoggedIn()) { - errorpage("Insufficient privilages to create application. Are you sure you are logged in"); + errorpage("Insufficient privilages to create application. Are you sure you are logged in?"); exit; } @@ -258,7 +257,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub']) echo "

This is the full view of the rejected application. \n"; echo "You need to pick a category before submitting \n"; echo "it into the database.\n"; - echo "

Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An email will automatically be sent to the\n"; + echo "

Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An e-mail will automatically be sent to the\n"; echo "submitter to let them know the item was deleted.

\n\n"; echo "\n\n"; } else @@ -313,7 +312,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub']) echo "

This is the full view of the application version that has been Rejected. \n"; echo "App Version This type of application will be nested under the selected application parent.\n"; - echo "

Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue an email will automatically be sent to the\n"; + echo "

Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An e-mail will automatically be sent to the\n"; echo "submitter to let him know the item was deleted.

\n\n"; echo "\n\n"; } else @@ -403,7 +402,7 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not defined, display the main app queue page { //help echo "
\n\n"; - echo "

This is the list of applications waiting for re-submition, or to be deleted.

\n"; + echo "

This is the list of applications waiting for re-submission, or to be deleted.

\n"; echo "

To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and\n"; echo "re-submit it into the AppDB .
\n"; echo "

\n\n"; @@ -426,10 +425,10 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not defined, display the main app queue page { //help echo "
\n\n"; - echo "

This is the list of versions waiting for re-submition or deletion.

\n"; + echo "

This is the list of versions waiting for re-submission or deletion.

\n"; echo "

To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and re-submit it into \n"; echo "the AppDB .
\n"; - echo "

Note that versions linked to application that have not been yet approved are not displayed in this list.

\n"; + echo "

Note that versions linked to application that have not been approved yet are not displayed in this list.

\n"; echo "the AppDB.
\n"; echo "
\n\n";